Reviews for Smile
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
I really loved this, reminds me of someone. Nice job!

Kristie Marie
End-of-forever chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
that feeling that you've lost how to smile...wow. you actually brought back a very specific memory of mine, with this poem, and that doesn't often happen to me. I really, really like your poetry.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
I really like the format and the dramatic mystery of the piece. Nice.
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Short sentences again, and I like that! Your message, as I saw it, was uncertainty when it came to a certain person. you had a deep message, and I hope I got it right. Although I miss the rhyming outside of the A/N.

It was a very short poem, so it is hard to comment on it...but I think that what I miss the most is your rhyming, really.

Keep it up!

The Reverse Edge Blade