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XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Me too, I wonder what he'll think. Great poem. I hope writing makes you feel a little better. Never quit. Great job as well!

Kristie Marie
PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Oh wow. Can I give you a hug? A lot of this is true for me, I can't even begin to tell you.
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Hmm...Are really all of these good news? Because many of them are so sad...

I like how you write everything off, although it would've been better if it had rhymed. Your setup with the short sentences is good! I like how you give the poem that kind of feeling with such short sentences!

Keep it up!

The Reverse Edge Blade
sweets555 chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
I'd love to come kick some freshmen ass for you, but I'm afraid I am about 300 miles south. Sorry dear.

Great piece, as always
vaudeville summers chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
Aw, very bittersweet, but it makes my heart ache. I've written things like this before when things seem like they're about to fall apart...((author favorited)).

DeAnna