Reviews for Hard Lesson Learned
Esther Jade chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
I liked the rhythm in your poem. In had a nice, regular metre which seemed to match the subject matter.

What I really didn't like was the lack of punctuation. Punctuation is crucial to poetry as it is supposed to be read aloud and punctuation tells the speaker when to stop and for how long. Try reading your poem and just breathing where you have commas!