|Reviews for Burn|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
I assume "Plath" is someone's name. If I hadn't read the summary, I wouldn't have understood that. Maybe just replace it with "she?"
I like the message here though. The last line, "to /burn/ herself" sums it up well: smoking only hurts you. Very important meaning that a lot of people can relate to. I know I can, because both my mom used to smoke and now my dad's girlfriend does.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
| Enigmatic Paramedic chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
I absolutely adore this.
Short, sweet, clever, concise.
[Not to mention that Sylvia Plath pretty much makes me melt.]
| S. Jane Maurer chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
:3 Nice Haiku-like thing! Beautiful imagery/meaning. I Plath.