|Reviews for I'm Not Dead|
| Collins-A chapter 17 . 9/12/2015
I guess it's a rich spoiled kids relationship, cause my siblings and I never treated each other like how Freya and Sacha treat each other, and we were never particularly close until some of us moved out. Now we're super tight.
| xXKimiko SakakiXx chapter 24 . 6/5/2013
Honestly don't know why this story only has 163 reviews:( It's so good! The human emotions and interactions and relationships. I honestly thought Freya and the rest of the family turned around (then again, it all happened too fast). I really like his dad but Daphne...ugh. That betch needs to learn her place:/
| mangatake chapter 24 . 3/15/2013
I adored this, thank you very much for sharing.
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/29/2012
.GOSH! i love this story WAY too much.
BTW- you are a talented writer :P
| NeonGreenGummieBears chapter 24 . 12/28/2012
This was a really good story and I stayed up until 4:30 in the morning reading it, so I don't want you to take any of the things I'm about to say the wrong way. I don't mean them as criticisms so much as just my own personal opinion.
I loved a lot of things about this story, but the one thing that disappointed me was that I couldn't connect to Ged. I mean, I liked him but not really with Sacha, if that makes sense. I think it was partially the age difference that turned me off, 10 years weirds me out a little bit. Other than that I just...I don't know. I like both Sacha and Ged as characters I just don't really understand how they ended up together? Is that what I'm trying to say? God I don't even know any more.
Now Callum I liked a lot, and when I was reading the first few chapters and honestly forgot that the name Ged was mentioned in the summary I was actually pushing for a CallumXSacha thing. Now don't get me wrong, I love Callum just as he is and have no problem with him being straight, it's just that maybe since I love him so much I wanted him to be another main character. What can I say, I like him more than Ged *shrugs*
That being said, I absolutely LOVE Emmy and even Xavier surprisingly. I wasn't expecting to but he grew on me in the end. Locke too :)
| ImmanenceEnsured chapter 24 . 12/1/2012
I liked it a lot, even if some parts were incredibly frustrating/not realistic. Sacha was a deep, interesting and genuinely nice character.
| Jack chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I came into this story just wanting to find something to read, and, I must say that this is phenomenal. I've only read the first chapter, and I usually wait till I have read the whole thing to review, but this chapter was so amazing that I just had to. Your writing is astonishing and the character you have created is hilarious. I found myself laughing through the chapter, and let me tell you, I have never laughed at a piece of writing like I have with this. A soft smirk or short giggle usually, but with this I was bursting out laughing. Thank you.
Only problem is that I hate characters who smoke, and it usually turns me right off, but I'm enjoying it so much that I'm just going to have to ignore it. lol
On to chapter two!
| JHeartbreak chapter 24 . 3/9/2012
I really enjoyed this story. The plot had me going the whole way through.
Since Sacha befriends people in the country and starts to put down roots, it’s really surprising that the ending has nothing to do with that. It feels like the characters he met at school never got a chance to develop, to matter in the story the way they should’ve. The flip side is that Locke’s developments at the end didn’t feel as impactful because we’d just met the guy.
Connor really needed to be more fleshed out if you are going to pin so much on him. Since so many of the story’s problems come back to him, he really needs clearer and more compelling motivations than a lack of values and money. Sacha’s family, at least, has the excuse of upholding conventional morality.
The characters mentioned above were pretty underdeveloped, but Ged and Emmy stand out as magnificently developed characters. Especially Ged, he fascinates me with his responses to the world.
Okay, so I know that was a lot more ‘could have improved at’ rather than ‘you did well’, but please understand that I greatly enjoyed the read and will check out the other stories on your profile.
| angry panda chapter 23 . 2/6/2012
you should do a sequel for Locke i really want to see him get himself together and fall in love.
| angry panda chapter 24 . 2/6/2012
i love this story. i went thought every emotion while reading this. im speechless about this story it was just that good. i mean there were errors but hey im not gonna let that stop me from read a perfectly great story
| Opalstar45 chapter 24 . 12/26/2011
I was kinda hoping him and Locke would get together... well it still ended well. Good job!
| magnanimousSquirrel chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
I actually feel for him. I mean, his parents obviously weren't very , ah, loving. He had to get back at them somehow.
| i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 24 . 10/22/2011
wow, reading this in one go left my head spinning!
i loved the sexual tension between ged and sasha, i just wish you drew it out longer xD i got so mad at ged for hurting sasha like that, now i've never been in love but i wouldn't have taken him back after that!
i must admit i kinda liked the fact that connor actually like sasha for real, though it made locke's situation all the more sad. if i were sasha i would have broken it off with connor and confessed everything to locke the moment i knew that connor was the guy he liked. you don't do that to friends.
i'm really glad that the family didn't just suddenly transform into a fairy-tale one, i actually found their niceness creepy p too bad with the sister though, i would have liked for her and sasha to have a good relationship.
emmy, i really liked her, though she turned into a fairy godmother in the end, i think it was a bit too much.
i liked all the friends he made, they were really sweet, and finn's and callum's competitions were very entertaining )
thank you for posting, your story made my day )
| Bloop Bloop chapter 24 . 9/13/2011
AWWWWWWWWWW this was sweet :) again, thanks for it.
| Russle chapter 24 . 9/7/2011
The ending made me smile. I just love happy endings~! .w.