|Reviews for you make me stutter|
| i'd delete this if possible chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
I lovelove this. It's so how I feel at the moment. It sucks having someone have that power over you when you know that they're not good for you. "there should be laws against/nervous energy like that." indeed.
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
i really like this. verry cute and honest and prettiful. ]
| generically beautiful chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Oh, but this *is* poetry. It isn't rhyme or rhythm or coherence that makes a poem. It's feeling. And this has feeling.
(And your line breaks are brilliantly placed, by the way. I thought you should know.)