|Reviews for Nobody's Fault But Mine|
| naiveastronaut chapter 22 . 9/9/2013
Finished reading and this will be one of my favorite stories. I love the chemistry between Tristan and Leah. Considering they're both very different from each other but I guess opposites do attract. :" It's funny, sweet and it's just awesome. Thank you for making this story :) You rock!
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/11/2013
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| Guest chapter 22 . 4/7/2013
I absolutely loved this fiction
And I dont care about the names..hell, u could have named somone edward and other, esme...
It didnt stop the fic from being incredibly amazing, heartfelt and entertaining
And they got together at just the right time..
And plus, you're an amazing author..
| brinalovesyouxx chapter 22 . 11/1/2012
Beautiful story, i dont expect anything more, all your stories are wonderful and this just adds the my favourites! Awesome story and keep up the awesome work.. And hopefully more stories in the future? :D xx
| The Quotidian Life chapter 22 . 10/10/2012
Lovely story. It was short and sweet, and in its own sense a little bit different. I enjoyed reading it! Leah and Tristan's relationship is truly adorable!
| MKMullen chapter 22 . 8/21/2012
I loved this story so much. You are a very talented author and I love your work :)
| SiahXSiren chapter 22 . 5/13/2012
That was sooo sweet :)
| imperfectlyokay chapter 22 . 5/7/2012
I've read...four of your stories, I think, and you're definitely going on my fav authors list, but before that I need to review, and I figured it'd be easier to put all my reviews in one place (ie here). So here goes!
Caller Unknown: I liked the plot, and if I hadn't seen the publication date I would have immediately gone "WHAT? Stealing from Sophie Kinsella?" But now obviously more inclined to think she stole from you. If you have no idea what I'm taking about, then you should know that author Sophie Kinsella's newest book has pretty much the exact same plot - not that I've read it but yeah, I've seen the blurb. I liked your two main characters - her irritating-ness and his stupidity with actually checking his service provider kept them from being Mary-Sue-ish. However, I do think it was a litttttle bit rushed towards the end and somewhat unbelievable that both of them were satisfied with each others' appearances - because really, how often does a cute guy leave his phone in a diner? BUT, that's just me being nitpicky. The guy HAS to be cute to make a good story, after all!
Opposite Ends of the Spectrum: Wow, I can't remember the last original fic I read that was so poignant. What I loved was how despite all the crap Aaron went through, she still had her spark, and came out on the other side bruised but kicking. I thought maybe Matt's turnaround to playful in the last couple chapters was a bit much BUT it added that bit of relief from the general angst of the story so that actually turned out good! Hmmm. I found Chris's character well-portrayed, but I think Matthew's dad could have used some work - though obviously, he's a secondary character so we don't really care about him. Overall: good, great, amazing!
Stranger Things Have Happened: The things I loved most was the rock star theme! Nothing adds spice to a story like sexy musicians, woooo! I loved Andrea's spunk, but sometimes her crankiness actually had me scowling in irritation, which is probably what you were going for. Sarah and Reed had way more patience that I ever will, so I'd probably be like Charlie in dealing with her! Oh, I loved Jonathan. He was a very sweet brother. I liked how even though they were both afraid of committment, they did eventually smarten up.
This story, Nobody's Fault But Mine, struck a particular chord with me because I'm actually writing a story right now where the main hot guy is the lead singer of a band, has blue-tipped hair and blue eyes and looks scary but really isn't - in other wordsn, pretty much Tristan's long-lost twin, so that was pretty creepy... I think in this one, some of the character reactions were a little unbelievable. My parents would never have that much tolerance, for example, and I probably wouldn't let a fake boyfriend kiss me in a crowded place "for practice". That's just me, of course, though. However, I DID like Leah even if she was sort of immature and idiotic at times. I really liked Bella too, because she sort of seemed more real.
I don't know which story this was in, but you wrote "calamity" pretty often in the wrong context - just felt I should point it out. "Calamity" cannot be in someone's eyes. A calamity is a noun relating to some great disaster or something.
On the other hand, I absolutely adore you for using the phrase "per se" correctly. You would not BELIEVE how many authors write "per say". It drives me insane!
Anyway, I've pretty much been hooked on your stories for the past couple of days, and my dad actually had to confiscate my phone at one point to make me study - so I'm definitely you, I'm loving your writing! Great job!
| Binkybaby chapter 22 . 8/16/2011
I... LOVED it!
| use.less.woman chapter 22 . 7/18/2011
I loved this story! So sweet! I have found all of your righting to be both crack me up and give me the warm fuzzies. Thanks for sharing them!
| Candescence chapter 22 . 3/21/2011
AW...cute. I like this story very much, though I think the characters came out of character at some parts. But, I like it. Good job
| PyroTech chapter 22 . 3/18/2011
I like this. Very much. Yup. XD
| PyroTech chapter 16 . 3/18/2011
For whatever reason, I was not expecting Tristan to actually punch the guy. I'm sitting here, reading your story all pleasant like and whatnot then BAM! Tristan punches Jake and I'm like 'OH!" and scared the shit out of my family. Hah!
| PyroTech chapter 15 . 3/18/2011
Goddess,this is so amusing!
| PyroTech chapter 5 . 3/18/2011
I love Tristan. Leah is annoying. Maybe it's because I'm "creepy" as well.