Reviews for Nobody's Fault But Mine
Writing4Eternity chapter 21 . 11/3/2008
I actually like this chapter.
palmsaresweaty chapter 21 . 11/2/2008
LOve it ...the whole story. it made me giddy too. I want wonderful boy.
light.and.darkness.angel chapter 21 . 11/2/2008
it was a bit abrubt but that's ok :)

I liked it anyway.

it was a good story, loved it.
JadeDream chapter 21 . 11/2/2008
aww its over? i figured it was getting close since they got together though. cant wait for the epilogue!

Loved this story, you did an amazing job!
what-is-the-truth333 chapter 21 . 11/2/2008
Now now children,” Bella scolded jokingly, “what have learned about sharing?”

“Sharing is for squares.” Tristan answered, “And I am a circle.”

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I loved this line! ...

and I waw suprised that you ended it so abruptly but, you could always pick it up later again...

Amazing Job!

my one critique: the conversation with her mom seemed to be worded akwardly.. but just that part of the story...

:D
000000001.0 chapter 21 . 11/2/2008
aw its uber cute!
hellolonely chapter 21 . 11/2/2008
I definitely don't think you ended it as abrupt as you thought, since I thought it was okay. Leah realized she really DID like Tristan more than she thought, and she fixed it in the end. And how cute! Tristan asked her to work as the receptionist where he was working, haha. All so adorable. Can't wait for the epilogue! :D
Twist Their Emotions chapter 21 . 11/2/2008
I figured that this chapter would be the last. So sad it's over! :( But I'm glad you finished. Aww. I enjoyed the whole thing and completely loved the ending. Thanks for a great story. :)
funnechick chapter 21 . 11/2/2008
It was great...I actually expected chapter 20 to be the end so it wasn't a surprise when you ended the story here. I can't wait to read the epilogue though!
Jevanminx chapter 21 . 11/2/2008
Aw, those two are just too sweet together.

JM
she gets skills from the pills chapter 21 . 11/2/2008
oh wow that was a good final chapter! i cant wait for the epilogue and im glad i am one of those people who have stayed with your story until the end because it was worth it AND MORE! xo
RebelianAngel chapter 21 . 11/1/2008
It wasn't what I expected, the ending anyway, but I love it. Usually I hate abrupt, unexpected, endings, but i have to say this was a good one. I especially love the very last line. I have a tendency to think of stories in my head to block out reality, but I've actually reached the point where I don't do it nearly as after, because reality IS so much better. anyway.. i just wanted to congratulate you on a brilliant ending
under the bed chapter 21 . 11/1/2008
Aww how cute ]
Electric Rose chapter 21 . 11/1/2008
i LOVE tristan.

even if he is a circle that doesnt like to share :P

But c'mon.

could he BE any sweeter? _

i think the way you ended it was just fine. Obviously, you could have added more or whatever, but i dont think it would have made TOO much of a difference.

awesome story :)
xLittleBlackConverse chapter 21 . 11/1/2008
Okay. This is the last chapter? Haha well, it was really good. But not my favourite last chapter but I know what you mean when you felt like ending it. Cant wait for the epilogue..Im gonna miss Tristan! Amazing story! Loved evry single bit ) xx
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