Reviews for Don't Know
sweets555 chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
I think I like it better without the cuz. More polished. I love this one, something that most people can relate too. chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
sweet! adding to favs.

by the way, i think the commas are better than the "cuz". commas make it seem more incomplete-ish which makes it a better poem.


XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Ok. What happened? And I like this poem. Keep writing!

Kristie Marie
PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Oh my. I thought this was amazing. Really. Really. Oh my. I think I would have liked the "cause" in there. But then I liked it the way it was. I don't know (oh, look at that), I just loved it.