Reviews for Obsession
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
The tragedy of this poem rings quietly and then louder as it goes on. I liked the simplicity of the rhyming xombined with the complexity of the words.

~the Stranger in the moonlight
Indred Dragon chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
torn pieces chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
I remembered someone when I saw the name "Chris", anyway, nice poem, deep choice of words and that made the poem more lovely.
nottoknow chapter 1 . 2/4/2008

you didn't even read over this did you?

i'm getting the feeling that you just sat down one day and wrote

and that makes the best type of work. not even thinking about it, just writing

i love it, its excellentXD
lookin4nemo chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
oh this is one of the best you have written! i absolutly love it!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
the word choice in this is really shows how powerful the obsession is... all the imagery is very powerful and the whole piece is just amazing...
Billie.Joelle chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
again, very good. keep writing!
Kaia Zeffirelli chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
This is, as always, absolutely amazing! I love it, I can relate to it, it's perfect. Great job! )

Anaare chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
First of all, many thanks for the review. Greatly appreciated.

I found this an enjoyable poem to read, strongly written. The wording is good and it has keen imagery. I don't believe I've ever heard of "double helix my disease" and it makes for a very interesting image. A good piece of poetry that captures the essence of its title. Well done.
Ecomsay chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
That is beautiful
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
I loved this. Great choice of words!

Kristie Marie
La Vida chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
It's nice because a majority of us can relate. "To double helix my disease I feel comfort" gives a nice mental image.

Thanks for sharing,