|Reviews for medical catastrophe|
| fairytale failure chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
This one sounds very raw; free and emotional. Like a breaking down moment, but still describes accurately the feeling of being overwhelmed, and writing really does help, doesn't it? Just so you can see your thoughts on the page.
| xfail chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
This is intense, to say the least! It's mostly open to interpretation, which is interesting. I love the very last line; it's such a powerful way to end a powerful poem!
| In the Rye chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
A little confusing the first time around. But after a few read through's it sounded a lot better.