Reviews for A Queen's Descent
beautyforashes1 chapter 5 . 3/9/2008
The story is really good, I couldn't stop reading it! Eric is such a sweetheart and you made Zoey very real. Can't wait for you to update!
Uniquely Proud chapter 5 . 3/6/2008

Great chapter! i wanna see how Zoey manages to cope with liza and the rest of the crowd later on. Update soon!
Petals of Paranoia chapter 5 . 3/6/2008
Wow, this story totally has me hooked! I can't wait to see more!
insanity-ward chapter 5 . 3/5/2008
wicked awesome chapter! luved it! PLZ UPDATE SOON! ]
NotMixedEqually chapter 5 . 3/5/2008
Great chapter! I love Zoey and how she's trying to change. Liza pretty amusing in how she must always stick to the socially accepted way of things.
NotMixedEqually chapter 4 . 3/2/2008
I really love this story so far! Zoey is such a realistic character. I love her personality. And as far as Eric goes, I'm definitely a fan. He seems like a great guy.

Please update soon!
Written chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
aww. this story is turning out wonderfully. keep writing! I love your portrayal of the main character and yeah. just awesome. good work :)
Uniquely Proud chapter 4 . 2/15/2008
Hi! Hmm, well, I see Eric as a down-to-earth, normal, the guy next door type of guy. i don't know, he's just a normal guy.

Update soon! Cant wait to read furthur!
Catherine Kate chapter 4 . 2/15/2008
I think Zoey shouldn't make rush decisions such as that...

She'll soon suffer with it. I certainly could sense it... -_-

This chap's in a roller coaster. No, it's not like it's so confusing that I go dizzy but the tons of things happend. And the thing that Mr. Harper and Eric is talking about... I'm a little curious about it too.

Zoey really needs a personality check. I can't describe what she seemed to me. Sometimes there's the cool nice chick. Then the mighty queen of the school. What the problem is that she pretends to be what people wants her to be but not what she wants to be... (Crazy, huh?) *SmIrK* (",)

People really are crazy...

Until next update...


YouHadxMe chapter 4 . 2/12/2008
this story is adorable !
insanity-ward chapter 4 . 2/10/2008
wow! wicked story! luv it! i can totally understand Zoey's situation but i still think she's being a little too over the top, cause i just know that Eric likes her back. Lol. anywayz, PLZ UPDATE SOON! ]
Murphy's Law's Biggest Mistake chapter 4 . 2/10/2008
Hey I've been lurking around and I really like your story, even though Eric's kinda hard to figure out you know. Does he like Gwen as more than a friend? haha i guess i should just wait to see what's going to happen but you can't blame me for being curious. Please update soon!
Katherine chapter 3 . 2/6/2008
I love Eric, actually. While I read chapter three, I was honestly jealous of Zoey (that's gotta be bad, being jealous of figments of someone's imagination! (:) because of her Eric time. Although her obsession with him is shocking at times and certainly was in the beginning, he's a great character and I'm looking forward to seeing more of him. I wish he and Zoey would have more sexual tension though. I completely understand, however, if you're specifically trying to keep us readers guessing about how he feels. And I'd love to see more flashback from the past-it lets us know a lot more about Zoey and even Eric, both of whom us readers love to hear about. (: Beautifully done though! Can't wait for chapter four.
Uniquely Proud chapter 3 . 2/5/2008
HI! Great chapter! I love it. :)

Update soon! Really really soon!
Catherine Kate chapter 3 . 2/5/2008
Eric's like someone I know. We've never talked for a long time almost a year now but suddenly he called up. Splattered over his assignments and collage adventures and we're back in talking terms again.

I'm kind of fond of this because of that. But I think Eric's nice. He never forgot Zoey, Erica and their friendship (I guess). And why NEVER? Ah...

...because he remembered a movie they watched when they're still at the fifth grade? Ah... Almost eight years ago?

That's one great friend, I'd say...-

He's Definitely One Great but Almost-Unknown Friend now...

*SiGh* *ChUcKlEs* Keep it going... Cravings starting to ignite here..!

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