Write more. NOW.

At least you didn't post it under romance like those other bdsm losers. Shame they don't have a closet paedophile category. All these Dom/sub stories would fit perfectly.

WOOOAAAAAHH. It was really freaking hot.

This was hot! Loved it! :)

This is the hottest and diriest fanfiction I had ever read. really good.

This has to be the BEST smut I've ever read, and I've read a lot of great smut:) I'd really love his there was a continuation of it;)

I like how you've written this story; there was no fumbling over words. :) I look forward to seeing more pieces like this.

I absolutely LOVED the dirty talk! Very, very hot D

Aw, that was almost...sweet! :D

HOT.

At first, I was all, like, scandalized. But then I'm like, "WTF? I'm used to this."

This was good shit. Sadly, the end was a bit ruined when my mum just randomly sat beside me, asking about my day. Oh, well. Still drool-tastic.

:P

...Excuse me while I go nosebleed . . .

-NOSEBLEED-

God, that was hot.

Your sentence structure, spelling and grammar are great.

Shoot! This seriously is the hottest story I've ever read (and believe me, I've read pretty many). I simply love it! Great work!

I can never find a story this good that's anything but a one-shot...I would give anything for you to continue this.

Hot beyond words. Don't think I'll ever find something as good as this again.