|Reviews for Red|
| Alteng chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
I'm doing catch up again.
This is a nice progression from one sin to another. It reminds me of something on the tip of my mind, but i can't place it.
I am really bad at poetry. So I can't say anything constructive.
| Sophie Stone chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Aha, I love this. On one level, it's light, but just beneath it is really quite deep. Only thing: I think you might want to add a comma in line eight.