this was REALLY good. write soon ]

okay, you got your wish: i cried. :(

i just didn't understand why he was leaving her.

could someone clear that up for me?

This was SO beautiful. you are amazing.

bec

p.s. going to my favorites!

Wow, this was really good. I'm very impressed. I like how you left things unsaid so the reader can decide what's going on. I didn't cry, but I did feel the emotions coming from both the characters. I liked how you even made him cry, a single tear yes, but still. I'm a sucker for guys that aren't afraid to cry, lol. That would be awesome if you could write his POV in the next chapter.