There have been no comments in a decade but this is beautiful. I hope this bittersweet (but cheesy) work will be preserved till the end of time.

Wow I really like this one-shot. And I started to cry towards the end, my eyes are still watery :)) I really like this one-shot

oh my god this is likee sooo great ! happy ending :)

i rather like this type of writing. a monologue. it made me felt somehow closer to the characters.

the storyline was common but the story was bittersweet nonetheless and that type of romance is my fave!

i dont remember the name of da story bt i remembr reading sumtin lyk dis except for da ending which was very differnt bt i like urs better...:)

XOXOXOX,

Freak of Music

Aww that was cute(: kind of like the song "Come Back to Me" by David Cook.

Great story, and nice way to write it!(:

love,

Brooke

Dude, 12 years is a long time. It is a pretty sweet story though. And I'm pretty surprised that he took her back even after all of the things she's done. I guess that is what true love is? Or well fictional ones anyway.

Love the story!

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lol, how culd anybody hate it? It's cute!

For a change I'm glad someone made the boy wait on, and pine for the girl instead of the other way round. Cute story!

Oh my goodness. That was probably the sweetest thing I have ever read. On a side note, I have to admit the obsession was a bit freaky but it was so sweet how he never gave up. ) Good job on the story )

That was just awesome. The guy never gave up hope, and I find that really sweet. )

On a side note, a cake like that sounds delicious. Is it possible to make something like that? Now I'm hungry. xD

Too cute!

Great work,

E.

*sigh* So sweet.

this is an awesome story for a first try! keep writing :)