|Reviews for Sweetest Regret|
| MegTheStrange chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
This is really good, I seriously like it. Great work
| kelsi bones chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
this is really sexy without being overly graphic. i really like it; good work.
| ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
I really like this! Especally the last part! I hope you got rid of your writers block.
| katie chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
this is good... i like it.
i have to say, at first i thought all those italics and brackets and and dots detracted from the poem a little, because there were just so many of them littered around - but then for some reason i paused on 's(k)in' and then it came to me and i was like 'WOAH.' haha, i hope it was intentional on your part otherwise i'd feel like an idiot, making a huge deal out of this, but...sin, right? we're made of skin and bones - and sin? wow. if that is what you meant, then i thought that was, haha, quite deep. and very clever.
captures the teenage lifestyle perfectly, i think! hahaha.
| cloner chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Teehee it looks pretty.
Ahh weight. A highly senstitive and silly ground. Everyone's too fat or too thin. *rolls eyes*
(and don't listen to BMIs. They mean nothing.)
I love the layout and the feel of the poem
| Sarah Allie chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Wow. Just... wow. That was absolutely beautiful, and very, very emotional. I liked how you weighted the words differently, you know, like bold, italics, and stuff like that.
I especially liked the line you used in your summary :).
You have talent, I can tell.
Sarah :) x