Reviews for Sweetest Regret
MegTheStrange chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
This is really good, I seriously like it. Great work
kelsi bones chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
this is really sexy without being overly graphic. i really like it; good work.

k.X
ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
I really like this! Especally the last part! I hope you got rid of your writers block.

P.
katie chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
this is good... i like it.

i have to say, at first i thought all those italics and brackets and and dots detracted from the poem a little, because there were just so many of them littered around - but then for some reason i paused on 's(k)in' and then it came to me and i was like 'WOAH.' haha, i hope it was intentional on your part otherwise i'd feel like an idiot, making a huge deal out of this, but...sin, right? we're made of skin and bones - and sin? wow. if that is what you meant, then i thought that was, haha, quite deep. and very clever.

captures the teenage lifestyle perfectly, i think! hahaha.

keep writing!
cloner chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Teehee it looks pretty.

Ahh weight. A highly senstitive and silly ground. Everyone's too fat or too thin. *rolls eyes*

(and don't listen to BMIs. They mean nothing.)

I love the layout and the feel of the poem
Sarah Allie chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Wow. Just... wow. That was absolutely beautiful, and very, very emotional. I liked how you weighted the words differently, you know, like bold, italics, and stuff like that.

I especially liked the line you used in your summary :).

You have talent, I can tell.

Sarah :) x