Reviews for Haiku 1
Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
This isn't bad. The only thing that bugs me is the double up of "beautiful". Considering it's a bland and abstract adjective to begin with I don't understand why you'd use it twice in such a short, condensed poem.

I'd recommend changing both of them to give this a little something extra.

Otherwise, not bad.

Midnight