Reviews for Crashing
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
i.n.t.e.r.e.s.t.i.n.g. BUT GOOD!
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Haha. You bave a knack for good last lines. The imagery you created was so beautiful, then . . . GoogleEarth

I'm sorry, you didn't list this as humor, so as for the more serious aspect: The "Skidding" at the beginning seemed weird. The pause created after it felt unnatural so early, and it sounds awkward when read fully. Maybe it's the "and." If you could take that out and replace it with something else, it might read more smoothly.

Nice idea, though. Very creative :)

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Dormio chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Great one! I like the last line.
mate.feed.kill.repeat chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Wow, that's a really cool look at things. That's ...amazing, I don't even know what to say. ]

-stix-

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Dreaming Chica chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Fantastic! wow I loved that! The reffernce to google earth wasa nice touch!

Dreaming Chica