i.n.t.e.r.e.s.t.i.n.g. BUT GOOD!

Haha. You bave a knack for good last lines. The imagery you created was so beautiful, then . . . GoogleEarth

I'm sorry, you didn't list this as humor, so as for the more serious aspect: The "Skidding" at the beginning seemed weird. The pause created after it felt unnatural so early, and it sounds awkward when read fully. Maybe it's the "and." If you could take that out and replace it with something else, it might read more smoothly.

Nice idea, though. Very creative :)

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

Great one! I like the last line.

Wow, that's a really cool look at things. That's ...amazing, I don't even know what to say. ]

-stix-

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Fantastic! wow I loved that! The reffernce to google earth wasa nice touch!

Dreaming Chica