Reviews for Flying Lessons
Amethyst Lin chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
The message in this poem really spoke to me. It's beautiful. It made me feel light!
Alphabetical Dreams chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
wow! gorgeous! it's such a very nice poem, and so sweet and romantic. i l.o.v.e the idea of flying lessons, it would be so much fun! and to be taught by the one you love... well... i really like the seocnd line, "he doesn't know it-if he did, he'd worry that i'd fall." it's like he's worried about your safety and he's a little bit protective, but he doesn't realize how happy he makes you, so he's fine raising you as high as you'll go. i also love the use of italics at the end of every line. it makes for very nice emphasis. your images are lovely. keep up the good work.

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