Reviews for if we are supposed to
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
i agree. i have stopped going to church every week because of this. i have tried to get to know the people but they don't care, they shut themeselves off. they seem dead anymore and it just breaks my heart.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
] I like how you're taking a stand for things lately. I agree. I mean, if you believe in something, then you should act on it.
musicislifewordsgiveitmeaning chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Hey, good job with this story. A lot of people think the same way you do, and hopefully even more people see this and make a change as well.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
I love that second to last stanza... its great and basically answers the questions you ask in the whole piece... the point is sadly very true... the only thing I didnt like was you used question marks at the end of two stanzas but not at the end of the other two.. that seemed odd to me
Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
YOu know I love all your work. So why should I review? Lol.