|Reviews for hypocrisy|
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
there are a few tenses and things that seem out of place to me. I understand what you are saying but it seems choppy.
| creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
very true.. it definitely makes a great point... I really love the last line
| In the Rye chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Some confusing sentence structure makes it difficult to understand. Sort of.
| Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
It was another good one. Keep it up.