|Reviews for the cycle of a day|
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
little odd to me, and you say some of my things seem creepy, lol. i understand once again but find it to not really mean much at all.
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
i really liked the descriptions but i didn't understand the point of the bold words.
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| Eve's Deception chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
I really like this. And i can relate, mostly because i'm always dead in the mornings. P but its a pretty piece. i feel like i should be thanking you for writing it, haha.
| creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
This reminds me of part of Romeo and Juliet...I forget the lines. But it's a sad way to look at things.
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
i loved this! and really, it's so true ha. Only small thing, your should be you're. that's all. rest was great. keep it up!
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
i like the whole cycle to this, brilliance. its sad in the same way a half-smile is sad. it had that whole poetic appeal today. sighh.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
you hardly feel like your alive... you're
It's interesting... the metaphor... kinda morbid, but very unique and well thought out... great job