Reviews for The Tale of the Broken Umbrella
theStarfly chapter 4 . 4/24/2008
This was a great chapter, Galen's character seems more deep than you're letting on. That's good. He knows a lot. Knowing is also good! I think that Knight is probably going to make a reappearance, but not until Luke is almost better. After Galen helps heal Luke (that's what it seems he will do, even if it takes a long time), Knight will show up and threaten to break Luke again, simply with his presence. Yes, I think that's what it seems will happen. Very good chapter. Sad. I can't wait to read more. Love always!
Ambriel chapter 4 . 4/19/2008
;_; *trembling chin* So sad! I live on the hope you'll give him a happy ending.

As for Knight, well I think Luke took his words way too seriously, but still I dislike him for making poor Lukey-boy so sad and emo. So he can go away as long as Luke gets a cuddle bunny that doesn't say mean things in anger!
Narcotic Affliction chapter 4 . 4/18/2008
It's so sad.

Luke's always maintaining

This loneliness and depressiveness.

Knight had so neatly broken him

That it' all he thinks about.


I hope Galen can save him

I hope.

And yesh!

Knight is so coming back.

Except this time,

Luke's better than him.

A lot better.
DeletionImminent chapter 4 . 4/17/2008

mkay, i like your fic _ you kept me up way past my bedtime, dammit, and im thinking i'll be distracted all day at work now.

As for Knight, i think he should show up again, but not until Luke's at least semi conscious again. poor boy needs some hugs befpre that, kk?

haha, but yes. cheers!

- Sy
princhi1 chapter 4 . 4/16/2008
I HOPE Knight's going to make an appearance. I want to know what his reaction was. I think he did love Luke though.

I sense a love triangle... Heh.

Glad you updated!
Cattails chapter 4 . 4/16/2008
The entire time, I just wanted to give Luke a hug! Oh, I love the name Galen...dark-haired guy finally has a name! Yay! Aw, it's cute how caring he is XD Hm...those flashbacks sound like Luke used to be a LOT different... Oh, and I just noticed all the mentionings of water and then paired with the title, it makes an awesome contrast! I'm not sure if that was on purpose, or if I'm just nuts from too much English... XD Oh, I think Knight should make a reappearance! Y'know, generate more angst/confusion (heh). I still love this story! XD
Domini-kun chapter 4 . 4/16/2008
Well, Knight might make a reappearance after Luke falls for Galen, telling Luke he's sorry he told him that and begging for him to come back, but Luke will say no and stay with Galen... Ya, I like that... Please continue this. It's... Touching.
Parchment Quill chapter 4 . 4/16/2008
Aw... Poor Luke, he's so adorable and so depressing... I just LOVE him. The sad thing is I can really relate to this story.

Anyways, I'm not sure if not will make an appearance or not. I mean, I can see it happening either way for different reasons. *shrugs*

Anyways, great chapter, update soon.
Esquirella chapter 4 . 4/16/2008
Is Luke thinking of Galen as another "Knight"? And will Luke ever see Knight again? (Not that he's in any condition to now, though. Just wondering.)
calamity jane chapter 4 . 4/16/2008
Wow poor Luke...he's in so much pain. I hope, eventually he'll realize how worthy he is and stop seeing himself as faceless. I absolutely luv the name's one of my you know who I'm rooting for! I really like this story and all the quirky characters. So keep up the great work! :)
kiki chapter 4 . 4/16/2008
Parchment Quill chapter 3 . 4/12/2008
I just love this story. The longing inside of Luke is so profound. His yearning to be held, and to be loved speaks to all of us, I think. It speaks clearly to me, it shows me a little piece of myself in the broken character that is Luke, the broken character longing for the perfection that was his lover. It says clearly that desires aren't fulfillments; just because you want something with all of your being does not mean that you will get it. It is a truth that we cannot deny, but it is a sad one nonetheless. Anyways, update soon.
Parchment Quill chapter 2 . 4/12/2008
Oh my, I feel so terrible. I didn't get any alerts for this story like I do for The Loveheart... Must have forgotten to do that. I didn't find out that you had updated this story until now, and I feel terrible. But, I am here now to make it all better.

I love Luke, you are very good at packing so much into a single character. I love the way you created a cloud that he carries around with him, the cloud that the broken umbrella can't prevent from raining down upon him. It is such a sad thing that he lives like that and keeps as much of himself for himself as he can. Anyways, I love the story so far, you are doing a great job, as always.
effay chapter 3 . 4/9/2008
Just to let you know I'm always forever omnipresent in reading your stories (though I should be murdered with a french baguette for not reviewing Dx), here is a review.

I LOVE THIS STORY. The words and everything is just so beautiful and so fxcking sad, please continue writing, I'm always waiting for updates! I love your writing and this story is wonderful. Your words are so amazing, it's like they make me want to cry, seriously. I feel so sorry for Luke and I just wanna hug him, xD

I love how you described the smileys in the snow and Luke's thoughts about the customer in the cafe, that was the best part with Knight's musical snow scene coming to a close second. Amazing, please continue writing with this story, it would be a terribly awful shame to stop writing it now. I'm already hooked! It's wonderful and so are you. Keep rawking hon. ]
Domini-kun chapter 3 . 4/6/2008
Actually, I DIDN'T think it was gonna be Knight, but I was blown away at the fact I was right that it would be computer guy. Woah. Freaky psychic abilities. *shivers* Oh well. PLEASE UPDATE! *cries*
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