Reviews for The Tale of the Broken Umbrella
Pixie Shtick chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
I feel like Luke a lot. This is so sad. I have to know what happens next.
bloopeebloop chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
I like this one. :)
CharismaticOutCry chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
I'm really liking this story so far, can't wait to see how it turns out! And what happens next. Keep it up, it's good.

Can't wait for the next one!

Maria chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
) 'Lo! Oh, this looks interesting! Dark is always awesome (though I'm a sucker for happy fluffy stories). Hehe. Yeah, I'd like to see how Luke changes, 'cause that would be cool. D And I like how you describe the flat. By the way. -thumbs up-
unknown'writer'loved chapter 1 . 1/31/2008


And I've decided, instead of clogging up every single one of your stories, I shall comment on all of the updates on one, yeah?


I loved what happened in Bubbles.

I loved what happened in Winter Storms especially (LOVE)

and I LOVE what's happening in this one, yeah?
Tobyk947 chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
I thought Luke would protest and beg... but he just left. please write more. i love dark, this is pretty deep.
Lyra Waterflame chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Oh... how sad! But, hey, I like to read sad sometimes... It reminds me that, hey, it could be worse... Anywho.

Please write more soon!
Lucy Kemnitzer chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
I want to see what Luke turns into!
erasmuss chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
OMIGOD! I dont knwo what the other story is but I like this one best! Darkness is so beutiful, this is beutiful and OMIGAWSH! I'm going to beocme a scremaing fangilr AGAIN! i relate to this baby Luke...sort...I RELATE! Deh- not really. Thoughless devotion isnt my thing...I more like...Thoughless whoring BUT OHMIGAWDOHMIGAWDOH-MI-GAWD! I want this story. I WANT IT. And youve only written the first chapter! Please people! Liek this one better! OHMIGAWD.


Failthful Fangirl screamer forever.

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