Reviews for The Tale of the Broken Umbrella
juppy chapter 11 . 3/26/2010
why is this not finished? im really sad. D:
L death note chapter 11 . 1/25/2010
i love this story! please please please PLEASE update soon!
lazyxhime chapter 11 . 10/24/2009
Haha I guess I'm lucky that I have a specific circle of friends in which we all squeal about yaoi and anime? Yeah, I used to never anyone who shared my obsession either. And I'm cosplaying as Tsuna from KHR this Christmas. ;D

ANYWAYS, I loved reading this! I love Galen! I wish I could meet someone like him in real life. *stars in eyes* PLEASE update again as soon as you can!
pandafoot105 chapter 3 . 9/19/2009
You really write angst as well as fluff and funny stuff. It's really amazing, the scene with the smilies in the snow is perfect. You really captured how it feels to fall that far down.
Kobashiftw chapter 11 . 9/10/2009
I so torn on this story because on the one hand i want Luke to end up with Knight, just cause it would be so sweet and i have this whole seen in my head where hes been at home upset about wat he said to luke and when he sees luke in the dinner he beggs for forgivness and they end happily ever after, but then theres galen who is helping luke get over knight and that in itself is lovable so i don't know. I can't wait till we learn more about Galen tho. Hope tat you update SOON!
Trinket chapter 11 . 9/8/2009
...please tell me that you haven't given up on this story... :S God, what is it with me and reading stories that I absolutely love and then finding out they never got finished? It's enough to make a girl cry... ;_;

I know you haven't updated this story for 11 months but please give it another glance... I'm a lot more invested in Luke and Galen than the idiotic (but admittedly lovable) bubble couple so it makes me sad thinking I'll never find out how it goes...

Best of luck with your writing,

Trinket )
StangenBaer chapter 11 . 9/7/2009
Hey! I just wanted to tell you how much I love this story! It makes me so sad, but that's not much of a change for me. I love Luke's melancholic ways of thinking and the way you write!

Some Constructive Criticsm: You write it march, not marsh, haha!

Wait, your last update was '08, but it's '09 now, UPDATE! I don't think I can live without this :D
Soraya Zeeva chapter 11 . 8/14/2009
Sometimes too you can think it was all a dream. I know that happens to me a lot. It gets to the point sometimes that I can never remember what really happened and what was a dream.

Another wonderful story so far. I keep waiting to see if you are going to have Knight walk back into his life. Either on purpose or more like on accident. I know Luke already has enough problems, but ever since the scene with Michael (that was the coworkers name right?) I've been waiting for Knight to show back up.
Greya chapter 11 . 6/21/2009
I love this story so much i can log-roll down a hill. It's absolutely spantatsic!
Solais chapter 11 . 6/16/2009
I can't believe you did this! *bawls*

Let me tell you what happened: little ol' me starts reading a story "The Tale of the Broken Umbrella" (awesome title by the way). And she reads, and the story's so wonderful and she starts crying, and crying, and crying, and reads all the chapters in one sitting whilst crying, and then she gets at chapter 11 and then she has no more chapters. :( And now she's still crying, because Luke is so sad, and he left Knight, and Knight's probably missing him, which just makes me sad for Galen who seems to care for Luke... *bawls a little more* but there are no more chapters, so we don't know if Knight misses Luke... or if Knight's even coming back (not that I really want him to, I like Galen, he's good for Luke)... So i was wondering... will there be more chapters? Will there? *flashes you puppy eyes with shiny, bright tears and a pathetically hopeful look *
blackstray chapter 11 . 6/11/2009
so that's it? it ends right there? god i hope you made a sequeal cuz i just love Galen X Luke together. but it kind of bothers me how not much of Luke's problems were solved. unless it was about Luke moving on with his life. still, i Loved this fanfic and i just want to read it All over again. such a wonderful story. 33
blackstray chapter 10 . 6/11/2009
oh, so thats's why it hurt so much for Knight to kick him out of the house like that. poor Luke. yeah, parents are a pain.
blackstray chapter 7 . 6/10/2009
aww, Luke's finally moving on. -tears of joy- so cute but noe Knights too cool to let go. D: well its nice to see what their relationship use to be like before the heart wrenching break-up.
blackstray chapter 5 . 6/10/2009
oh how bout uhm "is it dark enough? can you see me? do you want me? can you...reach me?" or "oh, i need the darkness, the sweetness, the sadness, the weakness" it can be found in the song "My Skin" by Natalie Merchant. it's funny, when you post those lyrics from those songs i thought, "wow wouldnt it be cool if i offered her a lyrics from a song i know" them i thought "nah, that could never happen" then this happens so im very glad to offer you up some song lyrics cuz i practically live off of sad mucis. so i could give more suggetions and my e-mail is .
blackstray chapter 4 . 6/10/2009
aw, poor Lukie -hugs Luke- i thought it was good to see how broken up Luke actually was with how he reacted to Gale. and it's good to see how their relationship was like before the break up and how they even met.
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