Awwww! I love it! Their relationship started out so weird, but their so cute! Eek! Awesome story! Well written and thought out!

i really liked it

charlotte

I like that she made her choice - to be with Tristan. He is good to her and has shown his love to her. Their first meeting might not have been ideal but it worked out in the end.

Hi. I love this story and its so beautiful story. :) I glad that Magda was the daughter of Brodie and Tristian. :D i felt sorry for Daniella and Robert but i am sure of that they can adopt kids from orphan house. I glad that Dustan and Brodie were best friend again. I wonder how many kids does Brodie and Tristian have? Aww how cute. :) I wonder if you would write Alex's story or Jake's story or Dustan's story or Kathleen's story please? Thanks. :) I glad that Robert stay away from Brodie and her family. Yay! :D Keep writing. I am look forward for your next story. :)

This is an awesome story! Especially love that this relationship developed from love at first sight!

aw, great story. cya later ~ Alenor

Ha-ha! I knew she was pregnant!

I have an eye for these kinds of things ;D

this sounds really interesting. i can't wait to read the rest tomorrow.

Very nice. I liked that it had an unconventional sort of situation, and I can see where this story can go if you decide to re-edit/expand.

Thanks for the wonderful experience,

Push

EEHH! Love this one.

By the way, are you interested in journalism as well? If not, how did you know so much about it?

This is amazing!

I love your characters..they are all just awesome!

lol

Love it!

Great story, keep up the good work.

great story!

xx

i really like this story!