Reviews for Nothing is ever what it seems
HollyRose2043 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
For most of the story, I thought he was a vampire.
Damned to heaven chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
That ending really did sum it up.
RaccoonQueen chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This was enjoyable and hilarious. I was expecting something completely different, but I was not disapointed in the slightest. Well done

Amburlyn Senay chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
That made me smile! I definitely wasn't expecting that!

I hope you don't mind, I'm planning to read all your work now that I finished UYLM!
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Its making me think of Red Ridig Hood- obviously a modern version of course!
Wunderbar chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
:D! One thing's for sure, the ending was definitely not what I expected from the beginning. Made me chuckle. Looking forward to your future works!
majormeggie chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
Gah! That was a really great piece of writing. Really simple, but effective. Made me laugh :] Everyone needs to get their minds out of the gutter ay. Haha.
bliink chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
That was really good!

I also thought he was deflowering her. The story was really good though. Kepp writing!
ImaginaryGirlChild chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
ACK! I cannot believe this! Alright, so I'm definately in love with you. I love this story, it has a perfect ending. I just love how well you pulled this off. Keep posting!
Kaleidoscope23 chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Haha this made me laugh..deffinately wasn't expecting a splinter.
Nova Light chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Hmm, I thought he was deflowering her at the beginning. Good write though :)
shutitoff chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
The synopsis made me think of Hansel and Gretel but it plays out like a bad joke. Still, I liked it ;)