| Reviews for rose petals |
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   yodel a blue streak chapter 1 . 2/1/2008 beautiful...i wish the 'brighter than the sun' was incorporated, but alas, i recognize haikus have restrictions...good work. |
| Reviews for rose petals |
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| yodel a blue streak chapter 1 . 2/1/2008 beautiful...i wish the 'brighter than the sun' was incorporated, but alas, i recognize haikus have restrictions...good work. |