Reviews for Swings
lymli chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
oh my, that's a lovely story, I really like this.
BalletManiac chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
I really really liked this poem. Great description.

I love how you ended your poem by saying :

'She knows she could fall at any moment

But it doesn’t stop her from climbing back on the swings

And getting lost in her thoughts'

Going to my favorites )

Wish Bone chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
It's good, but I hate being told things. SHOW.
underrose chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
that was really good.

i really liked the subtle meaning. )