|Reviews for Swings|
| lymli chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
oh my, that's a lovely story, I really like this.
| BalletManiac chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
I really really liked this poem. Great description.
I love how you ended your poem by saying :
'She knows she could fall at any moment
But it doesn’t stop her from climbing back on the swings
And getting lost in her thoughts'
Going to my favorites )
| Wish Bone chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
It's good, but I hate being told things. SHOW.
| underrose chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
that was really good.
i really liked the subtle meaning. )