|Reviews for A Muse Bouche Or How Marshall Got his Muse Back|
| ketchupblood1 chapter 11 . 3/23/2013
ohmygod. That was so adorable. :D I'm just sitting here with this huge grin on my face all like, "awwww."
| binnyboo chapter 11 . 7/30/2012
omg weeping. omg omg omggg. This is so omg. jfhrjgrkghw.
| binnyboo chapter 8 . 7/29/2012
fine .-. Gray is happier anyway.
| binnyboo chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
OMG GRAY WHERE THE MOTHER FUCK ARE YOU
| binnyboo chapter 2 . 7/29/2012
| HelloBilby chapter 11 . 6/10/2012
reading this story makes me happy. seriously, my face hurts from grinning too much.
I love that you're writing from the point of view of a writer.
| AnimeFreak4Life chapter 11 . 3/26/2012
awesome i love this fic so much update asap
| wildeep chapter 11 . 10/27/2011
I come back to the story sometimes when I want something sweet that makes me laugh.
Oh, and for the vaginal aneurisms, too.
Anyway, this is just to say I liked this story a whole lot and was wondering if you're thinking of writing more about Corey & Mars? (Like maybe about their elopement to Canada?)
| prostock69 chapter 4 . 9/28/2011
You are an amazing writer! I do have to say that I was totally confused after finishing chapter 4 and read a few lines into chapter 5. That was a dream sequence? I had to go read the reviews to see if I was the only one who had a WTF? moment. But I figured it out and got back on track. The rest of the story flowed beautifully. Also, the way you infused humor into this story was brilliant. However, I shouldn't have read this while on my elliptical. Damned near fell off twice from laughing so hard. :)
| Nightengale101 chapter 11 . 2/12/2011
Oh My Jesus Juice! I love this story so much. I don't think I've ever read anything that has made me laugh this hard before. Dude. Like Seriously this shit it awesome...unlike this review.
| Nikki chapter 11 . 10/29/2010
ohai it's myanalogy from LJ :)
I LOVED this! I really, really did! Marshall is a wonderfully written character, and Corey's daughter is absolutely hilarious.
Some constructive criticism though - I felt like the dream scene was quite awkward. I was completely confused until I got to the author's note, and even then it almost felt like they broke up a second time and you were just writing from a much later point in the story. There are definitely some grammatical mistakes, but your plot and characterization made it easy to look over. I liked Marshall's relationship with Corey, but it felt almost gimmick-y if that makes sense. I feel like I saw the ending coming for a long time.
I must say though, your characterization and humor is by far the best thing and I'm quite impressed. I wasn't sure what to expect with how nervous you seemed about this, but I'm so happy you decided to share it! This was very entertaining - I found myself becoming quite invested in the characters and plot. Keep up the good work! :D
| Yellow Cotton Hat chapter 11 . 10/21/2010
This is an absolutely beautiful story that brought tears to my eyes as well as making me cry.
You are an amazing writer.
| Poptart Guava King chapter 11 . 10/10/2010
this is quite honestly the most fun i've had reading a fic in a long time. I absolutely love marshall. to death. love.
| robot unicorn attack chapter 11 . 7/7/2010
this fic makes me giddy! :D
it also makes me laugh so hard ESPECIALLY at the christmas-themed dirty talk n_n I burst out laughing and laughed til there were tears in my eyes.
I can't remember a story that made me laugh so hard, and I especially love the fact that there were other relationships before Mars and Corey.
I never really liked Gray anyways. I liked him enough, but not enough to want him and Mars together.
Your an amazing writer and I cannot wait for the next chapter! :D
Love and Vaginal Aneurisms,
robot unicorn attack !
| sweetdonalbain81507notsignedin chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Did your mom tell you you were a good writer when you were four? This is a steaming pile of shit. I don't know what your problem is.