Reviews for ara pacis
she smolders chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Just gorgeous, I don't even know what to say.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
beautiful imagery with the threads and the nature... I love the Pompeii reference... awesome job
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
interesting poem loaded with imagery/descriptions

"but this is not Pompeii—/the eruption here is gradual." - loving the reference (along with the one about rome)

and the last line ties the poem up perfectly