Reviews for Moving On
Lilaclia chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
This is really great. You bring up emotions so easily and don't have to weave your way through it . These words are pretty meaningful and you don't deserved to get bashed on . at all . great job, keep your head up and look ahead .
crazyrandomgirl888 chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
it really does seems you moved on from you bf in this poem
KatieTheWriter chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Aw this poem is sad but relationships can go sour. I liked the ending, how you talk about finally moving on. Good job!
S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
! I think your writing is amazing. Seriously. I love the way you tell your story, but you leave enough blanks for the reader to put their own story into it. And these lines are really good, especially: "It was sweet at the time,

But now I understand it was just a game,

To make me cooperate just a little longer,

But, it didn’t work,

‘Cause I’m moving on,

Releasing you from me,

The person you always had to protect,


It This is something I've been trying to say for a while. I'm currently in the process of realizing who my true friends I'm rambling. Good job, keep writing]

paleimitators chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
I love this poem! He did give you good advice! I need to listen more to this poem!

It's executed perfectly! You might want to submit this as one of your poems. I'll go see what else you can submit. :D

Love ya! See you tomorrow!

-the beautiful bluebird