|Reviews for Better Than This|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
I like this piece a lot.. it flowed really well and there were some beautiful images like the spider webs and the description of your hair... very powerful
There was one line I might get rid of "On the passenger’s side,".. you already said some one else was driving so it's kinda implied
Also I got a bit confused with the she and the you... I'm not 100% sure who was who...
Other than that it was really awesome.. oh the other thing I liked was calling all those authors your friends, etc... that was great
PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon... there's a link in my profile
| softersin chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
I found this poem would drag on a bit, but none the less it kept me intrigued and I continued to read it all. All in all it's a very impressive piece of work. You've got talent.
Keep it up :)
| Irena chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
Wow, very strange and interesting - I'm intrigued - like the mood. Good work, Kid.