|Reviews for Bullies: The People That Make Us Feel Worthless|
| Opal Dream chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
wo-ow. This is great! So... emotinal. i love it.
| Filly and Phips chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Pretty interesting, but it doesn't seem as though you've ever been the bully.
Now I'm not saying that you should be. But you seem to be spitting up what everybody says.
Still very interesting,
You gave me a great idea,
| feeder chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Bullies exist because it's winter.
Also, welcome to life.
| TheDJ chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Wow, very good essay. When I was a kid (all those years ago :p) I was bullied pretty hard as well - but it made me into the person I am. A great essay :).
| RealityIsRealitive chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
It reads a bit too much like an essay in places. I know that, as an essay, that's impossible to avois completely, but you don't need to flaunt it. The flow is also a bit off. Even though it's not exactly poetry, I find it's easier to read something that has some sort of rythm to it. I had trouble understanding some of your metaphors. I had to go back and re-read some of them, which is a hassle. Other than that it's pretty good, and you definetely understand the subject matter.