Reviews for Just Seconds Too Late
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
I love this. The way that you structured it with your words in (italics) is wonderfully done and really adds to it. The ending i also like of course, keeping it strong and walking away.

Keep it up.
Parliament Of Whores chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
I think perhaps it could have been a little longer, and more detailed. But either way this is a very strong piece of writing.