Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
Omg this poem just lifted my hart because this poem ia exsacally qhat i was tbinking beacause i love my girl dezaray lynn little with all my hart and i am going to stay qith her for the rest of my life ahe is my world and she is my love for life and it will always be that way till the day i die and it qill stay that way qhen i do die.
hemed said said chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
its soo nice
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
I love this women name michelle colon
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paige chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
omg that was the cutest poem i have ever read!
Vijay chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Wow...this poem is awesome...thank you for sharing it with everyone...
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
This poem is an amazing poem. The words are so true and i could see my self inn this poem as i read it! OUTSTANDING!
white.rose.petal chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
A sweet poem, but I think it could be a little more eloquent. But I love it. For me, all that matters is that it comes straight from the heart, and it does! Nice job!