Reviews for Wintertide
fairytale failure chapter 2 . 2/6/2008
one - great description of that feeling, like you've just been cold for too long. I loved the part in brackets at the end; like you are alive underneath, only stuck behind unmoving veins.

two - accurately describes spring coming, and the one beautiful image of chairs shedding winter coats was really original.
randompoetry chapter 2 . 2/6/2008
you have a way with descriptions, i could literally feel spring in the second poem. talent.