PLEASE UPDATE SOON! LOVE IT

Who, who is it!

I hope you update soon...

PLEASE update soon!

This story sounds alright so far, but how does it relate to "I Dare You"? If at all?

I'm really anxious to see what happens next so please update soon. Are your other stories going to be updated as well?

whoa I wanna know what happen next it was too short! update soon!

dude that was great

loved it

well written

now, i know she's not dead n i really really wanna know what happens next so please update soon.

Loved

i'm intersted to see where this story is going...I like it so up the good work!

dude, great chappie

i luv ur way wit details

cant wait 4 da next one :)

ah! wow. update as soon as freaking possible!

this story is really good so far, very well written...i hope you can keep up with it and all your other ones

Umm.. Hi. I know i might sound a bit stupid for saying this but I am a bit confused.. Does her enemy know that she is a girl. If they do talk about equal treatment. And just to be sure whateer that guy did was enough to kill her right? Yeah okay done with the stupid questions.. Update soonI want to hear more!

what a cliffy you left us with! please update!

this story remind me of the movie Underworld (one of my favorite movies) so i'm very intrigued. i always love reading about a strong female character, so i'm already liking desari :) keep up the good work!

wow i mean wow that was so intense i mean there was so much detail and emotions you felt like you were the charatcer and a reader. This prologue is great you must continue the story.