Ugh I hope you update it but if you don't, fuck you, sorry for being so vengeful idk if that's the right word but ughhhh why does everyone never fucking complete their stories on fictionpress. Please please update it or put it up on wattpad or somewhere else, the fictionpress readers and me FUCKING BEG YOU

I've been rereading this so many times- ITS SO GOOD AND IDK IM SO ADDICTED. I will love you forever if you update.

ahh I finally found this story again! It's been 6 years but I'm still crossing my fingers hoping for an update 3 Since its been so long, idk if you'll see this, but I just want you to know that you have a huge, die-hard fan of this story, and that fan (points at myself) will never stop checking for an update haha. Much love! /hugs/

Oh, come on. You can't leave us hanging like that. Please please please update soon! : D

Noooooooo, no, no I need more! Please update soon! : D

Still waiting in desperate hopes for an update... 4 years isn't really that long, right? You could still be alive and using the same email. There might still be hope, right? RIGHT? DD:

Aahhhhhhh, it stopped! This story is so interesting and amazing, and I would really, really, reallyreally like to read more! (Even though it says that it's been a while since you last updated) PleasePleasePlease? I'll luff you forever if you do! :D

This was awesome! I really liked it a lot aside from the fact that I wanted to punch Jesses's face in, it was really good. Chase is adorable.

eep poor kay. UPDATE plz

ahh is been 3 years!

im liking it so far so hopefully you will update again?

:C I'll be very sad if you leave this story. It has so much potential and I love Kaylen so far! He's an adorable character.

Anyways, it's been a few, what, years? Well I added this on my alert list just in case you did update XD

Please update!

I presume since you added 'The Art of Attraction' to your favourites list and as that was published this year you are alive or someone else has access to your account. Either way just wanted to let you know that i love your story and am looking forward to any possible updates.

p.s. thanks for the recommendation for 'The Art of Attraction.' Anyone who writes well usually has a list worth viewing.

this story is quite interesting and Kaylen clearly shows all the symptoms of an abused victim... I sometimes wished those people were smarter because it's not just the abuse and they believing the abuser is kind, that no one understands him, because they think the abuser has all the reasons to be angry, they find the fault in themselves... it's also because they stay with him because they believe they won't find someone else, if they get past their thirties or so, they stay with the abuser because they don't want to be alone all their lives, even if they have miserable controlled lives...

Landom is bigger than Jesse although he is the one who doesn't beat people... what the hell was jesse doing with kaylen's car? was he the one cheating on him even though he accused kaylen? I bet, the bastard...

I hope Landom gets more suspicious than he already is, although I'm curious because he seems to pick up on Kaylen's situation pretty fast, so was he abused, does he know anyone who was abused or did he see the marks on Kaylen's neck? I can't wait to find out...

Kaylen is the naive one, he's so stupid, it makes me want to go there, kidnap him, deny him apple pies and when he asks why, I say: "You know why!" lol XP

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!

I really like this story! And I see you haven't updated since 2008 :( . Hopefully, you'll update soon!

Great story! I love Kaylen, he sounds incredibly cute ;) Landon sounds even more great... I completely love your characters and the story. I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update soon!

Athena