Reviews for The Illusion of Flight
Firetrap chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
I liked the way this flowed. The lay out of it [Sentances flooding into other verses] was effective in keeping me enthralled in the poem, and is one of my favourite formats. :) It was short, but still good. I especially liked the ending. I couldn't quite decided wether it was a 'happy' poem or a 'sad' one, and I still amn't sure, but the three verses at the end made it all the more thought provoking. It made the entire piece kind of SINK in. I alwaus think 'dead' is an extremely simple but powerful word. Well done, keep writing. :D
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
the chill air... chilly?

I liked this.. the descriptions were beautiful and the whole idea of the illusion of flying was really awesome