|Reviews for The Key|
| Mad Asher chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Pretty good, but I caught some phrases that didn't rhyme, like 'heart' and 'dirt' ... some of the rhyming also seemed stressed, like you were doing it just for the sake of rhyming alone-like 'gullibility' and 'the jury found me guilty' at the end, I didn't quiete understand that. Other than that I thought it was well done.
| Autumn Reflections chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
The lost door to love
Is open wide to me
- I love that bit, gives a strong feeling.