Reviews for the farm
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
Excellent sound switch progression. It echoes, before it echoes, if that makes any sense. Great haiku. MD:77.
Kaia Zeffirelli chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Once again, great job! You are very good at writing haiku!

-Katrina Zeffirelli
Basara chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
much more than meets the words formed... it speaks about the established self yet in some matter... find it too unfit for one's inner happiness...