Great job! I love the powerful images in the last verse. Keep up the great work!

This is...amazing. gorgeous.

It's truly a work of art.

I love the last line, the rhyme scheme is great, it flows well, the message is amazing.

10/10, I look forward to reading more of your work. :]

I can emphasize with this - just because I don't just care about bys, shopping and make up i am frequently looked down upon. Why? These people are just too insecure to be themselves...great poem, as well. I love the last line.

Not only did you say the same thing over again and again, but you said something that has already been covered countless times.