Reviews for Locks
berf chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
i like how you took the classic story and put a new twist to it. the imagery was very imaginative and i really liked the disturbing feel of it. wish there was more (:

-sarah
Rose Valentine chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Dark and simple horror that's really great!
Mechanical Dolls chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
Whoo! It's good! I like it. Any chance of updating it? I'd really like to see where it's heading. Hehe. Anyway, I like the grotesqueness (wtf is that a word) and the general creepiness and the mystery surrounding it.

Keep writing :)

-MD
BrennaRaven chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
That was great. I really like the imagry you created. It reminded me of a picture I've seen of a little creepy girl with the same sort of colour palette, standing in a creepy forest. There need to be more horror stories like this one. Cheers!

- Brenna
archived chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
oh that was spooky...

i liked it

something about those horses, huh?

really good imagery
Roberto Franchesco chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Impressive! I like the twisted "Alice in Wonderland" meets "Goldilocks" meets "A nightmare on Elm Street" feel of this piece. I enjoyed every bit of it. Excellent descriptions and use of imagery. Keep it up!