Reviews for Shipper
Lolo12 chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Hmm. not sure what to say about this one. I guess the meaning was almost there but it wasn't that clear. Maybe if you added just one more meaningful line, it would be ten times more clear. I bet you had something (or someone) in mind while writing this and it made complete sense to you, but as a reader i'm just a little confused.