|Reviews for Always Yours|
| David chapter 16 . 3/29/2012
Why isn't there any more! I'm so sad now :(
| grey280 chapter 2 . 11/10/2010
I still haven't figured out if this is the same Abel as the Anomaly Chronicles arc... I guess I'll just have to keep reading. :)
| Shiri-Matakami chapter 16 . 6/19/2010
I see all these beautiful stories that you have and the low number of reviews that they in no way deserve and I wish that I would review every chapter that you have ever written, three times over. Just so you would know how much I love these stories, how much that these words affect me.
But as I have noticed that is is very, very hard to pause and review when I am just one click away from the next chapter. I fear that I will say something that will be explained in merely a paragraph on the next page or that I will just put a single word or a smilie face.
Instead of giving a review that the stories deserves. Because the only way I can show how much these words that you have written mean to me is to tell you how they make me feel. And that take a little bit longer to do then I would be able to stand in between chapters.
I am so in love with Abel that when he got drunk it physically hurt me. You have written him so beautifully that I can't help but click the next button when I get to the bottom of the chapter. I just resonate so much with him and his reasoning and self-sacrificing ass way of life that I can't help but smile when I see his name. You have truly created a beautiful character.
And the transition of the story revolving around Abel while he is awake to Jaret while he sleeps is awesome. I love all these characters that you made, there personalities are brilliant and you made them real to me. I get angry at them like I do my actual friends. Like when Gallant was taking care of Abel while the other two were poking fun or even being assholish. Friends aren't always angels to each other and I think you have found that part beautifully.
The magic and the world you created settles something inside me. I live for the fantasy story that has magic and dragons and gods and knights and kings and romance and everything that can't exist in real life. I read to get away from this boring life I have so the more engaging and well written the world I am reading about gets the more often I lose track of time. The more often I get lost in my mind trying to create something that is half of what I have read.
This story, Always Yours, touches where few stories ever have. I read to pass the time, but rarely has a story stayed with me when I walk away from my computer. And even more rare is the time where I find myself masochistically waiting for the end to come because I know the story isn't finished. But I am unable to stop myself from reading the next line or even pausing for something as insignificant as sleep and food.
Because I could be seeing what is happening next. I could be finding out more of the train wreck of a romance between two character who care about each other, but realize there is more to a relationship then caring about each other. 'I love you' doesn't make everything better and 'I'm sorry' doesn't erase all that came before it.
Thank you for writing a story that has captured me so beautifully. Thanks for creating something that has me writing basically an essay at nearly three in the morning because my mind will not settle enough to sleep if I don't get it out now.
Thank you so much.
| xXx.Fallen.Angel.xXx chapter 16 . 7/3/2009
I really like his sstory so far, especially Abel and i love Jarets name, very immaginative. I really hope that you post the next one soon cause Im dying to see what happens.
Please update soon!
| JtheChosen1 chapter 16 . 6/27/2009
Oh man this is good! The political subterfuge is getting intense! I didn't catch any grammar or plot mishaps, so good work at that!
I can't wait for Abel and Jaret to get their act back together...but I really think Jaret should get on his knees and beg, since it really is his fault for the most part that Abel won't meet with him physically! Lol, I'm so cruel to Jaret .
| hazefilledmind chapter 16 . 6/27/2009
thanks for another update.
i'm really looking forward how things will go on from here.
| DiamondKing chapter 12 . 6/1/2009
O, the plot thickens. I'm excited to see what happens next; just wanted to review since this story certainly deserves a lot of reviews. Great work!
| Caisele chapter 15 . 5/29/2009
I WANT MORE!
| Caisele chapter 11 . 5/29/2009
You're not doing anything "wrong", it's just taking a bit long to get to the good parts, that's all. I suggest make-out scenes!
| Caisele chapter 4 . 5/29/2009
awn...heart-wrenching. poor abel...
now I'm mad at Jaret :(
| Caisele chapter 3 . 5/29/2009
| Caisele chapter 2 . 5/29/2009
Yayy! There is a plot to this, not like the other slash stories where there's only sex. Gud job :)
| DiamondKing chapter 11 . 5/28/2009
I have to say, I really do love your writing. Again, I find myself falling in love with the world that you've created and the characters are so real...if I weren't in a library right now, I'd probably be crying at this point. Honestly, you should have tons more reviews; this is an excellent work of art.
| DiamondKing chapter 7 . 5/28/2009
I simply love this story for a number of reasons, but primarily for the world that you create and the characters that inhabit it. I wish I could do the same with my work, but until then I'll simply enjoy reading YOUR work, hehe. I didn't want to continue reading without at least reviewing!
| JtheChosen1 chapter 15 . 5/28/2009
Very good work! As much as I like Jaret, hearing Abel yell at him was refreshing, especially when he told Jaret of his knowledge about his supposed 'love' sleeping with another noble.
Love it again, and keep up the great work!