Reviews for Heart
bleeding black and white chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
this is really cool. i know the format isn't how you wanted it but it looks good anyways. the latin is really unique. good job
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
I didn't see a translation for deliciolae... maybe i missed it

With the fp format... try putting - wherever you want a space that usually works

The idea of latin and english put together is really interesting... I like the piece... and I think it shaped as a heart would also be really awesome... there was line I didnt like

will die young as out friendships (when you translate amities) as out friend ships seems like a very odd phrase...

Other than that I really loved the piece.. it was well written and a good combination of sweet and sad
Novelist chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
:) I love it, the Latin really adds a unique touch