|Reviews for Tease|
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
This poem kinda makes me hate this girl. I don't know if that was what you were going for or not. But I hate people who lead others on (my personal opinion). I have to say that you do explain it well though, very well done.
Keep it up.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
I like this.. the piece flows really well and definitely makes you feel sorry for him.. I really like the personification of time... wonderful job