Reviews for More Than Meets The Ears |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, so cute! Kisses. They're always good. Good job with your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO you ended it *sob* your so mean i would hate you if you didn't write so good. Back to chapters earlier i liked how she climbed over the balcony and the comments she made it almost sounds a lot like me when i get my usual 5 hrs. of sleep. (i'm off today i sleep 13 - 14 hrs.) I think since your story is so awesome you should do a bit more about like school and what all Nat's friends think about her and Hunter and even some steriotype drama like another guy likes her or another girl likes Hunter something like that would be fine too. You just have to keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woot! Awesome ending! Great description (must EVERYONE do better at it than me?) and I love Hunter's character. It all just fits together so well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job, I really liked this. And yeah, it's not a one shot, more of a short story. :) Keep it up and update with something soon! Faith |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a freaking cool story usually i don't review till the end of a story but this is too cool! You got some awesome lines in here and my brother (unfortunately i have one) is staring at me funny cause i've started laugh a few times. The auditions were great you made up some coolish names and and Kenny (not sure of the name) coming through the window was funny you should have had him like hit his head or somthin'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. I thought the ending was really clever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I loved this story! Hunter is so cute when he's unsure of himself. I think I love him... Well, anyway... Great job! I'm looking forward to your next not-so-oneshot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, Hunter seems sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! I LOVED IT! The kiss was short and sweet. Good job! Can't wait to read some more of your not-so-one-shots one shots! lol. keep it up and have some OUCE-CREAM!-Chels |
![]() ![]() ![]() this. is. completely. brilliant. keep it up and looking forward to reading your other stories! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yey, it's done! So sweet and everything. Great story!Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He likes her! He likes her! and now she has to chase after him - or whatever else you have planned for the twosome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I wonder what he wants. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, he took off. I liked this chapter. Keep it up, and update soon. I like this :) Faith |